My Writings. My Thoughts.
What does this song remind me of?
Early 80s. Probably 1982 (since that’s when the song was released). I had a cassette recorder and headphones and had taped Only The Lonely from the radio along with other 80s hits.
I had biked to get a haircut at SuperCuts and decided to cruise around Glendale on my Redline BMX bike I bought with money from 8th grade graduation.
I was a melancholy teenager back then – especially with music playing in my ears. It would take me away from everything.
I dreamed of going to New York as I biked up Chevy Chase from Broadway. Past my house, past the Adventist Hospital, past school on Kimlin Drive and I made a turn on Lilac Lane past Cindy Orozco Keenan house then up and around to the top of the hill. Continue Reading
I belong to a Screenwriting forum and this is the number one issue. Ego. It’s thrown around like a badge of honor and it’s not.
Seems like everyone wants to be the ‘authority’ of screenwriting rules and how it’s done when the bottom line is – “Don’t try to be right – just do it right.”
Here’s some of those ego-driven hard fast rules that some screenwriters stand by and can NEVER let go of:
Don’t use Voice Overs… ever!
Don’t use camera angles/direction… ever!
Don’t break the 4th wall… ever!
Here’s what should be taught. Continue Reading
New screenwriters beware! If you are not in Screenwriting 101 you better be reading successful, well written screenplays and reading all the beginner screenwriting books you can find. I have to emphasize reading ‘well-written’ screenplays. Yes, it’s a crazy game out there and you’ll find some well-written screenplays that never hit the screen, and great movies with a poorly written (non standard) screenplay.
Why is this? Well, the successful film with a poorly written (as in the technical aspects of screenplay format) is not necessarily a bad script. Sometimes it is not ‘industry standard’ so-to-speak, as the writer is the director, the director is the writer, and/or the writer and director have ‘their way’ of doing things, etc.
As a neophyte screenwriter, follow the screenwriting format rules first – then, if you need to – break them!
Here are ten mistakes to avoid when writing your screenplay. Continue Reading
Today was the first game of my Softball league. Our team, The Walking Dread, have been practicing for 3 months. It was a long wait but finally the night came where we were all together as a team and got to play.
I was looking forward to playing under Friday Night Lights all week. That’s an understatement. I’ve been looking forward to play for three months to be close to exact. I was ready and excited. Nervous? Nope. Just happy that tonight was the night we could play together as a team.
I drove home from working with a list in my head of things to do. Top of the list was – find my sliding pants and cup.
In my head I knew exactly where it was.
It wasn’t there.
What the FRICK!
I went to the garage.
Checked my paintball gear bag. Continue Reading
One thing I try to do when writing a scene is to take the theme and try to get it to represent itself in every character from major character to minor character. As all the scenes add up in a feature, the theme should drip from every scene whether its on the nose or through subtext.
So when given an assignment of ‘a scene’ or a short or even a feature, I try to approach each scene with the theme I feel the complete story is supposed to represent. Of course its my take on the theme because everyone has a different view on a theme of a story on any particular day.
- A topic of discourse or discussion.
- A subject of artistic representation.
- An implicit or recurrent idea; a motif: a theme of powerlessness that runs through the diary; a party with a tropical island theme.
- A short composition assigned to a student as a writing exercise.
- Music. The principal melodic phrase in a composition, especially a melody forming the basis of a set of variations.
- Linguistics. A stem.
If the theme is LOVE CONQUERS ALL, or FEAR OF SUCCESS, or MONEY IS THE ROOT OF ALL EVIL, then every scene in my screenplay should have some sense of that theme when I write it. EVERY SCENE! When all the scenes are finally put together, the script should drip of this theme! Others may interpret it completely different than me, but as I write, I write from that theme. If you break down every scene in successful movies, you’ll find one resounding theme that links every scene together. It’s the ‘thematic’ throughline so-to-speak! Continue Reading
This is a blog excerpt from May 12, 2005… Thought you’d get a ‘kick’ out of it.
Here’s the situation.
It’s way past midnight.
All is quiet.
When suddenly it happens. The attack. And you have no recourse except to moan and groan in pain.
My daughter (age 2), seems to get this idea that if she kicks me in the eye in the middle of the night I’ll stop snoring. Well, that’s my interpretation of the logic behind her motives. She curls up on the pillows between Donna and me and her feet end up next to my head. But it doesn’t stop there. Of course I’m not awake to witness such an assault, but I’m guessing she recoils her leg and straightens them out as fast and as powerful as she possibly can into my eyeball in order to illicit a reaction out of me! Continue Reading
Can you make a list of 100 things you love? It takes time to do this. And part of writing is actually taking the time to sit down and do things. It might seem tedious or useless, but the practice is just doing it. And getting use to it.
In Julia Cameron’s book, “The Right to Write”, the chapter on DRAMA instructs the writer to set aside thirty minutes and list 100 things that they love. Then keep a copy of this list and pull it out and read it whenever stress strikes. It will connect you to the sense of well-being apart from the current drama.
I passed over this chapter assignment and read on to other chapters. I’ve followed each chapter and its writing assignments (not always in order) but this one kept nagging at me as I thought it was a waste of time. I mean, 100 things? That’s a long list that I might not be able to complete. I felt guilty for not doing the assignment.
So, today, as quickly as I can, I will list them. From 1 to 100. From the top of my head, here are the 100 things that I love.
Here’s my list as fast as I can list ‘em… Continue Reading
It turned into this… it was kinda free from, no real edits or rewrites – it is what it is. An exercise in writing.
Enjoy and… Happy Valentine’s Day.
I was dressed in a completely inappropriate shade of pink. My color scheme has never been my strength and when they said to wear pink, I had to find the only pink think I owned. It was a blouse stuffed way back on a shelf with other ‘old clothes for the garage’ cloths. I actually did not pick it because, first, I hate pink and second, it’s the only pink blouse I had. It was by necessity and not by choice. I grabbed at it knowing exactly where it was: three from the bottom. Continue Reading
There are two top notch screenwriting programs on the market: Final Draft Pro (FDP) and Movie Magic Screenwriter (MMS). There are also a few other desktop packages and web-based Screenwriting apps. But the top two programs that include all the bells and whistles are the aforementioned FDP and MMS.
Don’t get me wrong – I like them both. I use them both. But it really depends on the situation. Sometimes a writing partner, a producer, or a director might be using FDP and they pass the script along to me. So I have to use Final Draft Pro.
For most of my screenwriting needs, I use Movie Magic Screenwriter. Comparing them side-to-side – nothing really stands out. It’s really a writer’s preference. They have all the features you’d want in a fully functional $200 screenwriting package. So I’m not really doing a side-to-side comparison. I’m just going to tell you why I love MMS and why I prefer it over FDP.
I’m an out and about writer. What I mean is, I can write anywhere and I’m always “out and about” – but I don’t always have my laptop with me so it’s great there are online screenwriting options out there like Celtx and ScreenwritingPro if you have access to computer and the internet. But I also have a Nook HD Tablet and an iPhone 5s. So I can write using my Apple Bluetooth Keyboard on both. Yes, it looks funny to be typing on a keyboard with an iPhone 5S propped up, but if it works it works. Continue Reading
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